All Comments on 'Wedding Day Revenge'

I love both your stories. They each have a raw element to them that is wonderful. Thank you.

All three of them has issues. Michael has no balls and is a coward to let both women create havoc in his life.

Don't see how she came out on top there. He doesn't "love" her because if he did he wouldn't have married Kate in the first place. He bitches about Kate because that is what cheaters do to get people to cheat with them. And in the end Katie takes him back, he's a cheat who DOESN'T choose 'you', and 'you' walk away with no dignity.

The only thing missing would be 'happy ending ' 3 way with Julia Roberts , Cameron Diaz & lucky, lucky groom? I know it doesn't jibe with this story....yet. For that we need the Farrelly brothers & a roofie.

Michel is a slut and should be burned alive. His marriage vows spoken only and hour earlier mean nothing to him. An hour later he isa slut bitch in heat with another woman. No consequences. Maybe got a STD! I hope the betrayed bride takes every penny he's got then hires a gang to ass rape him.

No plot, no real details, not a good story line. Crap.

Well that was a in-your-face, nasty smack down. A little short with not as much detail as it needed. Needed a little more character development to really hit home. Keep on it!

pathetic characters, pathetic storyline, pathetic reasoning. all round your story is just pathetic. 1* if I could give it a lower rating I would.

I've actually fucked a Bride on her wedding day. It was a friend of my wife's and i detested her 'thinks he know's it all' hubby.

What an amazing story!!!! Great reading!