All Comments on 'Wedding Present Ch. 01'

Fuck off with this type of crap!!

The idea itself? Good. Your storytelling ability? Awful! A 1 because I cant give a 0.

16 paragraphs and you call this a story?

100% pure waste of time

Can't wait for Ch.2

I think this is in the wrong category,not really a wedding present seems it appeared to be a regular event.

Dear friend, it's a super concept story, ever I have read. I am searching a story like this where both wife and husband's parents and their siblings have get together for a family ritual and orgy. Thanks, but regret that your story is too short, please continue this story. My mail id: odiaapua@gmail.com

Isn't that just a little over the top?