All Comments on 'Wedding Swingers'

BUT ... you spent more time discribing "Truth or Dare" than you did the actual sex itself.

Swapping spouses sexually is always hot to imagine. I would have written more about what Amy was doing too, as many men have the fantasy of watching their wife with other men. Brian got the chance to watch it come true, yet all he ended up seeing was John shooting his load in her mouth. That is still a hot vision, but he missed everything else.

The story started off well, with a nice reciprocity, but than you shifted your focus on Katie alone. That's ok, but I would have loved to see her go at it also.

Well others have made some good comments, for me I would have liked to see it go longer, nice lead in, good starter but over all too soon. The story felt right and had good reality to it, I could believe close friends like this with teasing etc could end up swapping. If the sex had lasted that long I may have felt robbed in real life. Lol. Good read lets have more

Jean

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