All Comments on 'Weddings Bring Families Closer'

You need an editor and proof reader in the worst way. The idea of the story is plausible but your errors make it hard to read. I think somebody out there would help you if you ask.

Same story, different day,

Like many veterans of the Middle East, Evan is not a very nice man, using his sister, Sarah, in a futile attempt to assuage the PTSD nightmares which plague him. On the other hand, she seems to love him and wants to help. I hope she is on the pill. She has her work cut out, if this becomes a series.

His dick "slaps of his chest". So we can assume that he has a 16 inch dick, right?

What is this rediculous fascination with animal size dicks? It can only be penis envy on the part of an author with a bug sized dick. lol

Hymens are at the opening of the vaginal canal not up inside of it.

hi qt_pie123! I feel like the most important thing to note about your story is that it's YOUR work, so be proud of what you've created! don't let other people get you down, they're probably not brave enough to post anything themselves!!

keep up the good work, I'm really enjoying your writing style!!!

Nice story. Any future chapters? Is she pregnant?

Continue where you left off