All Comments on 'Wee Wee Camp: Rainy Day Humpers'

It may be an idea to get someone to review your stories and suggest some changes to make them more realistic and more in line with how people really talk. May have been okay as a story but the language detracted from it rather than adding to it.

I was one of the two writers of this story and it amazes me that people are so humorless. Has anyone ever heard the word 'satire' before? Apparently not. Don't take it too seriously, folks! We're just trying to have a little fun.

-Victor C. Nathan

Perhaps I read this too fast, but she makes a big deal about Henry's briefs when she is undressing him. Then, after the sex, he picks up a pair of boxers from his clothing pile. It probably makes more sense to have him wear boxers with such a big cock, not too mention that most boys that age eschew tighty-whities!

I liked the premise of the story, but the excessive use of profanity in it ruined it for me... too much use of the "f" word for my liking.