All Comments on 'Week of Firsts in Antigua'

very well done

I'm impressed with this author in terms of his or her writing style and correct use of the English language. All of the stories have a similar theme with the hot wife being taken by someone else, but still very erotic. My only suggestion for this story would have been to break it into multiple parts and expand on each of them. There were several sex scenes within this story that could easily have been expanded and became their own erotic story. Next time I would suggest doing that and having a four-part story. Great job - keep up the good work.

Nice writing, hot story, and I don't agree with the idea of splitting this into four separate stories. Some of the scenes could use a little more detail but to break it up into four parts would make it like many of the others here... a good start but not a whole story. I'd rather read a whole story than individual parts over the course of weeks or months.

I look forward to reading more about your adventures and explorations .... fantasy or not. My I suggest Punta Cana in the Dominican Republic. My wife and I have had a great time there.

Enuff said!

Good short story, hot!

Here is a hot story with consenting adults exploring their sexuality. Both on the same page makes it extra hot. Thanks