All Comments on 'Weekend at Home'

Sounds like that 30 something hottie might like his sister also?? Location, location, location there at the end? LOL..... This could be extended very nicely.

I normally look for longer stories, but for a one-pager, this was really, nicely done. I guess the length enhanced the spontaneity in a genuine way. I can normally see these plots unfold well in advance, but this was NOT what I expected and her nudity caught me by surprise too.

Yet still big enough to 'party' in... shzamm! where is this neighbour, just when I need her!?

My parents had a shower like this, but I never got to use it this way. Keep writing. I'm going to check out your other story right now!

Where's the rest of the story?

a partial tale

2 star for the brief synopsis

This was a nice start but where is the rest of it?

Good start

Good start, has all the possibilities of becoming a really good story. Why didn't he invite Ellie to stay for the weekend? Is Joanna going to join him for another shower... together, of course? Will Ellie return in the middle of the night to slide under the sheets with him? Inquiring minds want to know.

GOOD WHILE IT LASTED...STRANGE PLACE TO END IT. FIVE STARS!