All Comments on 'Weekend Getaway'

Beautifully written Alleine. Maybe not a true accounting of a sexual encounter, but one that you want to happen, just as you've written it. You seem to be a rare lady, one who is stimulated by the sight of sex as well as the feelings of it. As a man who dearly loves giving oral pleasure, I hope to find you some day. Only on a few occasions have I found a woman who enjoys and is excited by watching a mans mouth on her. Facial expressions, the intensity of her stare and body reactions, automatic and the controlled, are what inspires more and vigirous actions on my part. I do hope you will write more, much more. You are really good at descriptions and creating pictures with your words. Longer stories would be better though, would like to be able to stroke myself off as I read about your enjoyment. Thank you. Richard

Your writing is wonderfully descriptive. Just the right amount of buildup to the hot sex. Keep it up.

Very good story. Loved the descriptive detail and how the story flowed. Good first effort. Write more when you get time.