All Comments on 'Weekend Getaway'

This story needs editing.

Not everyone can be a great writer, but this could have been a much better story if someone had bothered to simply proofread it before posting.

I did attempt to use a volunteer editor to help edit this story, unfortunately after a month of waiting for them to respond they never did and I did what the best I could with editing it.

The need for editing has been mentioned and I can only underline this. It is a story with some potential and I kept reading - and enjoying - in spite of all the blunders.

But one thing, they live 50 miles apart yet they need FOUR HOURS to get to a hotel that is in between??