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Click hereI helped her up and off of the table, she grabbed the wash cloth and headed for the bathroom. I crawled into the bed and flipped through the channels as I awaited for her to return. She emerged from the bathroom and slipped in beside me. Snuggling up and putting her head on my chest.
I turned off the tv and the lights and drifted off to sleep with her snuggled against me.
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EJSurrealover 8 years agoHad to stop reading it as the constant switching of tenses was overwhelming. I think you get confused at the first morning in the hotel, my advice is to eliminate that part from when she wakes up until when he comes back and then go through and fix tenses. Hope that helps.
