All Comments on 'Weekend of Love Pt. 02'

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Tootight1Tootight1over 7 years ago
good story

of course it is, and correct for this site, but could be a lot better, if there was some kind of preface, or intro, into who these people are. Are they married, friends, how old they are, would help understanding their heads and thinking. It's obvious they both enjoy what's going on, but why, where are their thoughts? This story is good in what's involved in it, but leaves the reader wondering who and what are they.

I actually got confused as to who was who, and if they were both CD's or Trans people, or what.

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