All Comments on 'Weekend on the Water Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
No relationship here ...

These are surely criminal acts .

He is being forced into this behaviour .

When he is finally released - or murdered - what then ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Intor to Sir

An interesting day with some spit-roasting involved with Sir. Just too bad Sir didn't turn out to be a Shemale. That would have made for an even more entertaining twist.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great story! Loved the way they left him.

Great story! Loved the spot roast and the way they left him until they're ready to come back for more. Permanent marker comments were a nice touch.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Two Sides Of The Coin

loving this story so far, would really like some more

and maybe the protagonist turning the tables a little?

tulsaguy113tulsaguy113about 4 years ago
More!

Please continue this series...I love your writing!

kagelo1kagelo1over 2 years ago

Great one, thank you!

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