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Dirty slut... Dirty whore...
Panting... gasping... we are eventually spent... our bodies worn out... our minds exhausted... we collapse... onto the bed... our bodies melting together... as my cock softens... and slips from the embrace of your ass...
To be continued???
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoToo difficult to read and get much meaning. Stop the overkill of ellipsis.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoI started our really enjoying your story. My opinion... It started out really strong and sexy hot. It progressed along to him taking and her giving her sweet ass. A fantastic story, but the short spurts of words (again in my opinion) just seemed t distract from the story after they continued toward the middle of the second page. A great story, but with words so brief it seems tha a shorter version would have served better.
Anonymousabout 14 years agoHow utterly delicious. I really like the writing style, and loved the actual content.
