All Comments on 'Weekend with Friends Ch. 01'

This was a story any writer could be pleased with producing; that English isn't your first language makes it even more remarkable!

Very well done -- I thoroughly enjoyed your story, and many native English writers could learn much from it.

Again, my thanks, welcome to Literotica, and please have five stars with my good wishes.

Can't believe English is not your first language. Agree with previous comment. Although this is not my usual category for reading I was intrigued reading your intro. Was not expecting a decent read. My only problem is the safe words. One to pause or break in the scene and one to stop completely. Before you add to the story you need to establish a safe action or signal if Kate is gagged. How would she speak the safe word if gagged and then reach a limit? Just something to consider. Good luck in your future postings.