by lengthylarry
weekend with sis stories are best i've ever read.best of all stories on lit....well done
This is amazing to the point of actually being worth this comment, though you have frequent spelling errors they only slightly take away from the overall effect.
I really think you should continue with this!! Really good story and I think it would make sense if on the 5th chapter his sister couldn't resist no more and he would get to fuck her!!
need use spell check or get it proof read. was lame in a few spots, could have more sexual detail into it. so did the bro and sis finally fuck ?
Too bad there is no ending. I was really getting into it. Seeing how old the other comments are, I am sure there will be no ending. Therefore my score is a 2.