All Comments on 'Weight of Penumbra Ch. 01'

I hope you enjoy my surprise. If you want to listen to the music I was writing to, I have a Beyond Eclipse Soundtrack playlist on Spotify. Just search for Beyond Eclipse.

Cheers and Happy Reading,

Talyis

It is an interesting story having just read the entirety of the first book. But, you really need an editor because there are lots of errors that make it harder to read. I do have some difficulty with Kiowa not realizing she has lots of powers, even when she has experienced them and has been told she is very powerful.

My theory was that Kiowa's father was secretly Y'vroi and was either accidentally killed during Eclipse or had to leave his human family behind for their safety. Since Gaelen didn't recognize him from his picture, I guess I'm well and truly wrong 😥. Glad to see the continuation!