All Comments on 'Weight of Penumbra Ch. 04'

I am confused as to whether his soul named sebol or kiowa is that deliberate? Or are we meant to KNOW?

This is a great story. The longer I read it, the better it gets. I'm really starting to love the characters (even if the story's a bit more angst-y than my usual fare) and the plot's growing on me as it unfolds.

The only complaint I have is your penchant for the cliffhanger; the end of book 1 wasn't just suspenseful, it was brutal. Now we've waited 8 months to hear Gaelen's soul-name. Please continue this or at least make a post telling us what Gaelen's soul has revealed. :)

Thank you for writing this story and especially for sharing it with us. I look forward to reading whatever else you choose to write and share.

Hey, when are you coming back to finish or are you even coming back to finish this story,?

Please continue this story. The suspense is killing us. lol. I have a bad feeling Kiowa is going to be screwed over here, and that He will come to regret this soul name person once the dust settles. Just because someone is named a soul name doesn't mean they will bring that person happiness. Kiowa will likely carry his child but that child will be loyal to her and the cause.

Plz finish this book. Plz

You investment in the characters improved from your first "book". Then you dropped the ball. Thanks for nothing

Please finish the story!