by mtnman2003
I was disheartened by lack of enviormental detail. This story could have been any season. It seemed like you just threw in a date for the Xmas submission. Also, i didn't know what the characters looked like, just their bodies. Good luck to you anyways.
now why havent I thought of that? I liked the story...the sex...the steamy, steamy sex...
You so good at writing sex scenes...do you think these up all day long???
Good luck in the contest
~Honey
But it would have been nice to have more detail of EVERYTHING, not just their sex parts. Good luck in the contest!
Just because a woman doesn't pay attention, doesn't mean she's a bitch. YOU are not the center of the universe, no matter how much you think you are.
Lousy ass wish fulfilment story.
Sorry chump, better luck next time.