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by Therandy1

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
I liked it

Well written, good intro and cheeky ending. In some places you were using some of the same material a few times. I.e the bit about her clit rubbing on your shaft and the overuse of the word bucking. Watch out for that. But in all it's really a good bit of writing.

NymzanSusaurenNymzanSusaurenabout 11 years ago
Well written...

A few misspelled words, but amusing as hell to read...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Keeeeep it going on

Use the spell checker, okay?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
dude! sequel!

Dude write a sequal for this one

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