All Comments on 'Welcome Back'

Five.

I did not expect to get such positive feedback. I thank those that read, voted for, and favorited my story. I was hoping for at least one the first day, but seven is certainly a compliment.

Also it was brought to my attention that I hadn't expanded much on the Lizzie character. That was intentional, but I will be bringing her back as a main character in her own story.

Cute story. A bit confusing on the back and forth of the flashbacks and switching between the different POVs but I enjoyed it.

Both Katy and Serena are enchanting with their respective guys. You write in detail and didn't skimp on anything with this submission: there's a great backstory to Serena/Mitchell, a wonderful reconciliation and a good portion regarding Jake/Katy. The thoughts, emotions and sexual feelings for all are well described and in good detail. Only detraction came from the flashbacks, which are great tools if properly placed, but can confuse when not. Some of them were slightly out of order, but for your first time back, I'm not going to make an issue of it.

I was very impressed and hope you'll keep writing. Perhaps more installments on this are on the way or you'll write something else? Keep us informed. :) 5.

Love it!!!!!

Great first story. Very very hot.

Well done for your first submission. The only issue was that at the beginning of the story, Serena was described as a virgin. Later in the story she admitted that she had "hooked up" with other men as a way to try and forget Mitchell. A good editor should have caught that. Thank you and am looking forward to your next submission

**** (4 stars)

Very well written. I have to echo some of the previous comments regarding the flashbacks, but after a few, they became easier to figure out. Great detail and character development, definitely looking forward to more of your work!

Was a 5*****!

Very detailed and easy to follow; with steamy sex scenes!