by jerrygfan
This story was Marvelous. It is one of the best sensual stories i have ever read. I have trouble even finding the right words to how i felt as i read this. It is excatly how makeing Love is. I also loved how you said,"her flower" intead of being blunt,you gave it a perfect name, which was more sensual, and less crude. Brovo Gerry. i give you 11 out of 10.