by KatieAnnBB
I enjoyed this very much... Please consider following some of the people in this story line.
Even though I am a male, I really felt the emotion deep from my heart. The story was darn good roller-coaster ride where the emotional struggle was overcome in a logical end. The narration, characters - Janice, Danielle, Ellen and Mackenzie - and plot were well taken care and was a great read. Pleasure, Passion, Peace, Profanity were all been dealt in a right dosage. Great!!! Kudos!!!
agree with below comments - well constructed and brought to expected conclusion with class and style; keep up the great work KatieAnnBB
Love incest and lez stories but seldom see a combination. Keep 'em cumming ! I'm so hot from reqading this come on vibe.
This is a fantastic story! Very well written, the emotional struggle between mother and daughter culminating in an intimate sexual exploration. Please consider writing more to this story as I (and probably more people that read this) would love to see where their explorations lead them. Simply amazing.
You know how much I adore your writing and this didn't disappoint!
Excellent story, well developed and very intimate. I agree with the other commentors that you may consider writing more chapters about this relationship. Could be very spicy and steamy to read.
What a wonderful story. Love is love, and I agree that the exploration of the intimate bond between a mother and her daughter is sorely under represented. Well done!
You can really tell she was tryin to make one of the best mom daughter stories out there, and it was def really good. Def not the hottest, but that obviously wasn't jus some smut story. It was def a love story. Tbh Im usually rubbing myself while reading these, but I found my hand quickly stopping the attempted motions even during the sex sequence. I guess I was jus too engrossed in the story XP
This is a very sensitive and natural story about a mother's special love for her daughter. I did enjoy reading it. Thank you so much.
Lovely and tender Love Story mmmmmm
Very well done!
Lovely Story!
I love lesbian incest stories mmmmmmm
So, how about introducing a few more family women on the story? Like a loving Granny and a kinky Aunt mmmmmm ?
Thank you for some loving wet wet moments Reading yours stories mmmmmm
Helena
52yo Lesbian Aunt from Portugal
Honestly? This story meant a lot to me. I'm trying to find myself and my sexuality and I'm so happy I stumbled across this(: it's different from the general fuck stories you find here on Literotica, it's a beautiful love story, and well... I really like the fact that you got so emotional writing it too. It really shines through
i loved the story and felt moved, soul & body. As I read, I masturbated more intensely than usual. Hope you will write more thanks.
I love how Janice and Danielle seduced each other, but I suspect there's a lovely story involving Coach Ellen. I hope you write her story soon! Thank you very much!
I sure "screwed the pooch" on this one. It should be 5* all the way. Sorry about that. Hope Chapter 2 is just as hot.
I generally keep my distance from incest stories. But KatieAnn always writes so well, and if anyone could pull it off she could. And you did, with dignity and decency. A beautiful paean to love and the human heart. Great characterization too, i really like these people. Bravo
A beautiful story of two beautiful women so much in love. I am a guy, but I am also a romantic and love stories that have a “happy ending”.