All Comments on 'Welcome to the Neighborhood'

I like the idea of the story, and enjoyed the telling. Please continue, I hope to read more someday. Well done, Thankyou for sharing.

I think you are a writer who has made an excellent start and shows great potential in the world of literotica! This first story might need a little more subtlety to build the erotic sensations more gradually. I read your second story about Brianna in her backyard and saw a little more anticipation evident there. It builds in a little suspense and titillation in my humble opinion.

I think you have real talent, so keep working on your creative development. YOU definitely have great ideas and a gift for erotica---and it all starts with "desire" lurking deep inside and an ability to translate it into words! Keep writing. Dante

This is the third time i have read this story each time it gets me very excited. Wish I was David and my wife Linda was Brianna. best sory I have read!!!

Great story! I loved it! Maybe you should make it at the end, so somehow they get to return the favor to someone else...

PS I would *love* to watch you do something like that...

A loss in this story of the bare cock and bare pussy not getting used by another couple or single of the opposite sex. Any husband and wife can fuck, either in private or amongst friends.

Please consider a sequel, perhaps with a new couple to the neighborhood being initiated or with one of the older couples losing a bet and having to join the nude pair.

Nice story with great build-up

This storie was so hot!!

Love your stuff. All three diff but hot!!

Grab one of the bottles with whatever drug and fingerprints they have in/on them. Go to the Police and you own them. Them sending you the pictures just adds to the evidence. SO a little jail time for all of them (accessories ya know) and them onto Civil Court where you will get enough money from all involved to retire to a nice beach. What a bunch of idiots the neighbors are.

Great story,we loved all three party games, the game with the Banana

Split was a real turn on, perhaps Briannie should have licked it clean

More stories like this please

Reminds me of long ago when my wife stuck a peeled banana in her pussy and then I ate it as it eased back out. Thanks for the reminder.

ending with " my heart thumping with excitement" was a real turn on for me. First reluctant and then wanting more is hot. I would love to do it with people watching.

Let me know if any houses for sale

This happen to us too,we happened to go to a party but didn’t know it was a swingers party.They drugged our drinks too.Their were 2 other couples their that we New.They made us undress an change undies too.I remember I had on my wife’s beige vanity fair panty an white bra an she was in my t shirt an boxers.After we changed the women came to me An started playing,an the men did to my wife.

Revisited this story after several yeas gap,Just as sexy but since then have been wearing wife s panties, which gives me a thrill, and she strokes me and makes me cum

rather like the concept of a couple serving as nude bartenders for other clothed couples then made" to preform. don't like the drugged aspect

I hate stuff like this if this would have happen to my wife and I some one would be in jail. That not any thing to do to any one all would be in big trouble here.