All Comments on 'Well Booted... Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Hope to read more

You did an excellent job of getting the reader to see the characters as real people. So, a light weight domination scene seemed a really big deal. Which in real life it is. Most authors don't bring the characters to life and over do the domination.

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