by MLG52
At least these characters seem to have feelings/thoughts about what is happening.
Please give us more,very origanal story line,Ive neverread anything like it before.I especially love the mother and son parts.Please do more chapters
Great idea... thought this would be a great story but it wasn't....I've read all chapters and it sucks
A very intense story! I hated to see it end. Perhaps the author would include a few more chapters? Stuff like babies being born and perhaps "mother" acquiring one of the "seer" positions after having more children etc. Thanks for a great story!
This story needs more finalization in my opinion. I mean it's a great story, to great to end only a few days into the "welcoming womb" program sort of leaves it incomplete. Perhaps you might add a chapter jumping to 10 or 20 or 30 years down the road?
Where did you get the idea for this? It reminds me of researched pagan rituals from 10,000 years ago. Yes, they did such things.
After reading a good many romantic and/or erotic stories here and other places, I must admit your story is by far the most creative so far. As many others here, I might ask you to carry your excellent imagination further with this theme, but most of all, keep writing...
Very captivating erotic story. Wish you would continue it. Love to hear more about Jacob and Alison.
I hope you have more chapters in mind. great story so far. Please keep it going.
BUt please do more incest mother/son scenes and extreme mom/son love.
A very intriguing story it requires episodes to see if his mother, sister and wife get pregnant maybe mum is past child bearing age. Also whether or not a rescue attempt is made.
Yes but, think if son pregnant his Mom and sister with dads permission is how interesting, and ofcourse dad pregnant daughter with wife's blessings. You can add others like bro pregnant sisters daughter and mom in law etc. Mailid: odiaapua@gmail.com
I read this series years and years ago, and have never forgotten it. I keep coming back every year or so to see if it has been added to. I'd really like to see what happens later on. Or perhaps this is the best ending - they go on like this forever.
When is part 5 coming out when the husband finds them and they tell him they're staying.
It's missing what happens when Jeremiah becomes Fat Mama's interpreter and a citizen of the village/city... and after that when Jacob (Jake) becomes the husband of Big Mama's widowed daughter-in-law, thereby becoming a prince! So, no more being lowly slaves!! Some time after that, the soldiers who killed most of the pirates after some weeks of searching, finally found them, killed Big Fat Mama, but of course the women didn't want to leave. However, Jake's Mother took some of the Black natives with her to England where she seduced so many white women there into having sex with those natives that that's why England became the integrated population it is today! Oh, and some of the really yechy stuff MLG52 wrote earlier NEVER happened.