by raphy
I love your style. What a fun fast moving story... just what I wanted to read tonight. Let me believe that such an event could actually happen...hmmmm, gives me some ideas.
thank you~
You are a very good writer. Yes, the story moves - I found it great writing...flowing....and it was fun! This was a good story...and great writing! Winemaster
the only thing I wanted to add...you could have left out the Jesus....blank...Christ - the story is good...you could come up with another expression...I know - I worry about this in a porn story...crazy!
Great story. I felt I was there. I love Lit stories with humor, it adds something to the plot. Loved the great description of the little Asian doll and all her attributes and him enjoying them. Best of all 'That just means we'll have to do it again'. Sheeeit!
A soldier is a cuck for a whore wife who fucks strangers. And he is protecting our life and liberties?
didn't read the tale, based on title couldn't read.
maybe u need a dictionary 1 star *
So maybe there's a chance for the rest of us...