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All Comments on 'Well That Was Unexpected'

by juanwildone

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Accuracy

It seems like some of the names got mixed up in your story, make sure to check and double check them before posting!

Pjam1968Pjam1968over 1 year ago

Description on the development of the action is foggy, lack of more description on the emotions on each character along the way

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To all the authors I've stolen from - ya caught me red-handed - at least that's all I'll admit to having in my hand. None of these stories ever occurred - except between my ears, which I should probably go and clean now.