All Comments on 'Wendy Ch. 03'

I love this story and can't wait for more. Your writing reminds me a little of "The Claiming of Sleeping Beauty" by Anne Rice.

Hot! I like how smart your writing is, and how you take your time getting us there... lI'm looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Loving the stories. Loving the build up. Please please please write some more...i cant wait.

hurry finish split the chick in two already

love the buildup, please continue story.

Please continue.

I loved the start of the story, please finish

It would've been a good story if chapters 1-3 were condensed, and there was some actual rape involved! It was a waste of my time to read.

Can't wait to read the rest!

Another person said Chapter 1-3 should be joined together and I agree, but I think you have an excellent story in progress, and I wish you would start back up again.

Slow start which I like, the contrasts between lifestyles/cultures really adds something. I hope you keep going with them, cant wait for the enxt one.

where is the next chapter??

I love your story, but please keep going. I can't wait to see how it ends!

love the story line. u r a great writer. i just want more

MORE!!

this story... i love it ^_^ cant wait to read more :)

more please?

I hope that one day you decide on writing more to this story. I like it a lot and am eager to see, how Wendy decides to pay of her debt. It would be interesting to see, how James reacts if she decides for the non-sexual way of payment. That should test him keeping his word...

You really need to complete the story. It has so much potential!

i hope that Wendy's education goes a good many chapters, and i would like to see her a very horny vixen after a time.

more please this was an awsome start and very hot

I was hoping you would complete the story as I'm very interested in seeing how it ends. Pleas continue.

This is a good story, but I would hardly consider it at an end. Can readers such as myself find out where Wendy's adventures go????

Please write next chapter, it was just getting good!

Hmm well writen. Good job.

Best thing would be if she earned her freedom quickly and left. That would screw him over😂