by Frederick Carol
Very well writted story, the sex scenes are very HOT! Reads smoothly and should be a winner. Time will tell!
I thought it was well written but lacked buildup as the decision to swap was made so early in the story
Although this was good it fell short of some of your prior classics
it was over. Sort of a quick cum and the excitement was over, yet it didn't seem time to be over. I assume that this was written for some "Nude Day" contest or maybe other contest, so the future coupling on the island and the boat would remain to be expanded upon in a future story. This was good and exemplified the concept of satisfying the Nude Day theme, so all credit to the author for a good plot and some eroticism. Thanks.