All Comments on 'Were They Only Dreams?'

by Riyven

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playfulgirl2001playfulgirl2001about 18 years ago
hotttttttttttttttttt

oh goddddddddd....very very hotttttttt..i loved it and i'm looking forword to reading more from You :-)

patti

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Good concept

the writing needs some work. Keep trying though, practice makes perfect.

txrosenaynaytxrosenaynayabout 18 years ago
Excellent....

and very enjoyable especially for a first. Good story and build up although this could have been made into a much longer story which i personally like however...this one was brought along just right in length. Thank you for sharing and hope to hear more from you soon. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

RiyvenRiyvenabout 18 years agoAuthor
Thank you for the feedback

sorry for taking so long to reply. thank you all for you comments. I am hoping to have more of my stories on soon, and hope they meet with the same level of appreciation.

Riyven

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Good Story

Wow--that is really sexy --one man for each opening makes for the best experience!

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