by Riyven
oh goddddddddd....very very hotttttttt..i loved it and i'm looking forword to reading more from You :-)
patti
the writing needs some work. Keep trying though, practice makes perfect.
and very enjoyable especially for a first. Good story and build up although this could have been made into a much longer story which i personally like however...this one was brought along just right in length. Thank you for sharing and hope to hear more from you soon. respectfully fan in Texas naynay
sorry for taking so long to reply. thank you all for you comments. I am hoping to have more of my stories on soon, and hope they meet with the same level of appreciation.
Riyven
Wow--that is really sexy --one man for each opening makes for the best experience!