All Comments on 'West Coast Career'

please write more on their adventure to the west coast, what he does and what she does on the west coast. the world is your oyster with this story well done!

Thank's Anon, no plans at the moment to continue the story, but you never know.

Would love to hear the next chapter or two of this now.

Intense.

I'm curious how you'll keep the progression going.

Men are hunters. We love the hunt. The chase. The capture. But once it’s over, we’re bored and need another hunt.

So how long before he’s bored with his toy and dumps her for a younger and hotter wife?

And what is his ex-wife supposed to do having lost all ability to think?

"Lisa's husband has an opportunity on the west coast but her."

I agree entirely, only a sociopath or a psychopath would want a woman as a fuck toy, well that or a boy. As to what happens when he gets bored it’s simple he wouldn’t care because he can’t care so long as he doesn’t get caught. If he doesn’t care about her why not just divorce her? Problems in a marriage are never just one persons fault.

The story doesn’t hold up as a fantasy, to be a fantasy it has to be literally physically unattainable or be achievable, realistic but beyond what the dreamer can currently achieve. As brainwashing is achievable it turns this story into something sinister instead of erotic.

she flipped from reluctant to enthusiastic really fast, you could probably drag down the process longer. good story though

I would like to see what happens in California!

Need a second story

Please write more stories like this!