All Comments on 'Wet Dream: 02'

You have got to continue this story! I love the flow of both stories; keep it going!

Good story.

Maybe you need the help of an orthographic corrector or one editor to solve the grammatical errors, but the story looks well.

Good Job.

Very well done. I think mom wants in on this!

This is a very good start as far as the plot goes. The writing, punctuation,grammar needs a little more polish. All the technical stuff would be assisted by a good editor. As to the plot. The brother and sis need to go all the way and THEN Mom wants in on it. IMHO

Keep going please

Yes, Mom knows very well what they are doing and is very horny herself. Maybe, both Di and Jay need to work their Mom over and both get her off a few times! I think that will keep their Mom from stopping them, as long as Di gets on protection. Mom knows that soon they will be screwing each other. Yes, we do need more. Thanks.