All Comments on 'We've Travelled So Far Pt. 01'

10 to 12 episodes?

You managed to cram in not 10 to 12 clichés in the first page, but a lot more.

Learn to write one page, then come back.

Looking forward to chapter 2. This is a great start so far, you had me hooked from the start. I’m really impressed with David’s character, his deep, unwavering love for his wife & family & his personal values & morality. It’s easy to write a cheating character.....a whole lot harder to write a character who’s fidelity is being constantly tested & tempted, yet he never gives in. I like the fact that you went ahead & told us what was wrong with Maria instead of making us wait & wait to find out (personally, I thought cancer). Also enjoyed the back & forth, past & present.....it flowed seamlessly & I was never confused with where the story was going. All in all, great job....can’t wait to read more!!!