All Comments on 'What a Discovery'

"She dived under the covers" just cuz spill ck sayz it's spelt write doesn't mean the Gramur is corrict.

Would you like to explain that for me and everyone else please?

I think mr anonimouse was trying to bag on your verb useage. Dived in this case was wrong, it should have said " She dove under the covers." Not a major faux pas but wrong useage none the less. Now I've explained his comment. Time for my own. I gerally liked the story but it flowed poorly in my opinion. Felt like we rushed to the sex, then rushed that too. Keep at it and don't rely on spell check to give proper grammar tips.

Saxon_Hart was correct in that it seemed a little rushed.

However, the anonymous comments regarding "dived" and "dove", I think are a result of the differences between British English and American English. Your use of the "dived" form is correct. Unfortunately, some of our American friends sometimes fail to take account of the fact that American English has developed to use different verb forms from the standard English. Unfortunately, anyone seeing that you used "Mum" instead of "Mom" should have been able to work that out. Our American friend should always remember that the English language was around long before the American continent was discovered by Europeans!

Keep at it, try to build more tension and don't be too keen to get to the "money shot" too quickly.

Still a good one.

Next time I use Dived, I'll put Dove in brackets? lol

A fast moving story and a well used theme, but I still liked the story.

I would like to read some more of their sex scenes, that part of the story seemed a little short to me.

Thanks for the read

Naaaaaaaniiiaaaaaaaaneeeeeeiiijiiiiii Bobby !!!! Every body talks about you and your mom all over the Marianas islands especially here in saipan.

Don't understand the comment about the Marianas, or Saipan? Anyone?

In good style and of direction written..

A hundred times better from those "shaven" and "bald" pussies, of from those "massive", "enormous", "huge", "big", "monster"(etc.) dick,

similarly as well as of monstrous breasts and asses (whether of drunk entirely partners)..

This is a great story the twist on mom not knowing about the tape was a nice touch

As one who has no problem with mutually consensual incest in real life, I was a little disappointed with the blackmail. If the son truly respected and loved his mother, he simply could have given his mother the DVD and let her make her choice via free will.

The author has the ability to write a good story. He developed the plot logically. He used gutter slang only when absolutely dictated by the story circumstances.