All Comments on 'What a Saturday'

by JungleJane

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
I give your story a 4

The storyline is great! However it seems to start off too "fast". If you were to start the story off a little slower, maybe with the two women being more shy and hesitant. Altogether though, it was graphic, but not too graphic. You can tell a woman wrote the story which is what I personally like. Good Job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
WOW

Hey Sweetie....Great story...I am at work and read it...hehe....i will have to wait a few before standing if you know what i mean...lol...hugs....Jason

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
I quit reading when he had her sticking her.......

finger in the other's shithole

You guys can't leave it alone can you?

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