by only_more_so
A very nicely written holiday jewel. It holds the promise of continuation for a great Christmas story. I look forward to the next installment. I hope you continue to develope the relationship of the first 3 characters, and infuse Tina and Bill into the storyline. Once again a very good piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with us...
This was one of the better stories I've read. There were a few words mistyped, but the story was both interesting and excitingly erotic. I wish that would happen to me.
An enjoyable tale with a great twist. Looking forward to the sequel!
Wonderful, delightful, pleasing, and other similar adjectives come to mind. As do hot, sweet and tender.
This is the second story of yours I've read, I love the dreamy quality you have given them. Will read more.
Thankyou!
I loved it!! What a nice, beautiful way to spend a Christmas Eve! Keep writing!!
You need to continue this and get Bill and Tina involved in the next chapter.