All Comments on 'What a Week!'

love this story there should be a sequeal to it good writing and no mistakes 5 stars

Thanks for another fine story with some procedural thrown in. I'm gonna have to go shopping though as I only have four pistols and a shotgun in tactical locations.

Keep up the good work,

another goodstory

I enjoy long slow stories and this was really fine work. I do not agree with those that require to close with a description of the future of the couple. Today is the moment and we never know what will happen tomorrow. Therefore all stories end on a Today....

As always, right on...............

U r prised this had slipped through the net as no comments for 8 years. Really liked it and especially the growing love betwedn them.

I’m sorry but people don’t talk like you have written. People talk in short sentences, even phrases, and generally don’t orate for numerous sentences in a row. Even conversations where one is explaining something are more back and forth.