All Comments on 'What A Wonderful Stepdaughter Ch. 02'

Overall, a great story.

Chapter is too short

love how her she text her mom back like nothing is going on keep the mom clueless and maybe add them getting bolder around her mom and mom never finds out.

carol

Very good, please continue it

Can not wait for more.... A lot more hopefully!

you did make sequel .......... I've only read little bit this thus far ....... i'll read

when able ................... without reading almost thee entire story this chapter .....

i'll already agree with the comment - HER MOTHER\HIS WIFE doesn't learn

the tryst sometime soon possibly never " matter fact " STEPFATHER \

STEPDAUGHTER continue with getting bolder around her ..............................

i'll agree that person said that other terms they used

I don't normally read this type of story, but I am definitely interested in seeing where this goes.

You must continue the story. Many places to go with it - Mom & daughter pregnant at the same time, Mom finds out (then what) Mom never finds out (the affair contiues?) Mom meets tragic accident? Step Dad meets accident then daughter discovers pregnancy? So many plot twists! Write more!

What happened to chapter 1 it isn't in the incest/taboo category?

'hoped out of bed'? Try 'hopped'

'the sun shined ...'? Try 'shone'

and so on and so on ...........

I like the story but after a while the typos, misspellings and poor choice of phrasing just get annoying. Many authors on this sight make the same mistakes. It interrupts the flow of the story, especially for a slow reader like me. I think they should spend some time proofreading instead of being in a big rush to get their story out.