All Comments on 'What A Wonderful Stepdaughter Ch. 03'

Is English your second language?

The story is pretty good, but your grammar is extremely poor. I agree with the Anonymous commentator who suggested that English isn't your native language. An editor would help you immensely. And, having posted a story that should have been edited, I know whereof I write.

like i said befor mom/wife never finds out she is so clueless

carol

Great story..Can't wait to see what path they go down next :-)

This is awesome. I want to read moooore :)

Wow great story had me getting hard wishing was my stepdaughter