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All Comments on 'What a Wonderful, Wintry Feeling'

by JJgreenville

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great, but watch the grammar

"They" should be "he", "them" should be "him", "it's" should be "its" (unless you mean "it is"), and so on. Keep an eye on the grammar and story will flow better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
You lost me at...

"Not too bad looking for an 83 year old man."

jonathanlovescockjonathanlovescockalmost 12 years ago

83 yrs old put me off there and then.?

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