All Comments on 'What are Friends for Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
You seemed to forget...

You seemed to forget... it's supposed to be an erotic story.

You better stop now.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Loved it

Different from other stories but in a good way. The dialogue and plot were realistic and I for one thought it was very erotic. Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I love these two

Amazing voices for both of them. You really get a sense of their personalities and the flow of speech from this story. I love them rediscovering one another this way. Really lovely story.

jenorma2012jenorma2012about 6 years ago
pretty good

I thought I might not like the ending but it turned out to be a very good ending, every one should be allowed to get a 2nd chance, can't wait for the next part

AnonymousWriter244AnonymousWriter244about 6 years ago
Loved this story

This is a beautiful soul-baring story. The theme leaned to the extreme, but beautiful nontheless. Please go on.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
beautiful

oh i just can't wait for more , please keep posting !! . this is a really beautiful story i am really hoping to read they become a couple . i'm a sucker for a erotic ,romantic story . thanks

LinneaLundinLinneaLundinabout 6 years ago
Great story

I can’t wait for more with these two.

Slurpy29Slurpy29about 6 years ago
Wanting for More

You have the making of a beautiful, romantic story here. I am really looking forward getting more into the girls’ past and what lies ahead for them. The setting you established regarding peer and parent pressure was nicely done. And the mystery character at the end leaves a great cliffhanger.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Sweet Story

This is a supersweet glimpse at the life of high schoolgirls. The way Trish was able to forgive Quinn and choose not to get revenge was a nice touch; great stuff.

G1breelG1breelabout 6 years ago
Yay I got to vote for it again...

I really enjoyed the tone and the dynamics between Trish & Quinn. While it’s maybe not for everyone, I like it when stories have a context beyond their sexual content. For me, this one conveyed how easily people get in their own way, and how hard it can be recover from that.

Great work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Good story.

Would it be dramatic to say that I would die for Trish and Quinn?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Well I thought it was erotic...

really not sure what first Anonymous was going on about.

Well done i would say.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I'LL STAY TUNED FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER

Your writing is very nice. Characters have a demission beyond a drive to have sex and I like that.

KantariiKantariialmost 6 years ago

This was a nice, enjoyable story to read. I will be back next weekend to read the second chapter.

🌹Kant👠👠👠

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Hell of a teller!

~You are a hell of a teller. One hell of one. Everything is statement, you tell us exactly what is going on. You're a teller.

~I would like some nuance. I would like some pathos. I would like for you to draw me into the world you are trying to create. You write like a young adult, with enthusiasm, but not anime. Give me something with some life.

AwkwardMDAwkwardMDalmost 5 years agoAuthor
Oh By The Way

I have, over the years, collected a lot of art (for this story and others). Be sure to check http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=1496319 to see these characters and more!

theangeloftemptationtheangeloftemptationabout 4 years ago
I'm not good at leaving feedback

This was really enjoyable to read. Thank you for sharing it with me. XXOO

Lovecraft_LoreLovecraft_Loreabout 3 years ago

5 stars

Women doing things to each other is not really my thing but I like the dynamic and the tension between the two characters

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