All Comments on 'What are Sisters For?'

What can I do to improve? I was trying to show the family dynamic as dysfunctional. Too much? Not enough? Is it worth doing a part 2? I twelcome constructive criticism..

I hope in future chapters you decide to let Val find out sisters true intentions and have him turn the tables somehow. Or maybe Cindy find out and protects Val so he doesn't get hurt too bad. Loving the story so far. Definitely worth continuing

I enjoyed this story and look forward to more. I love the background flashbacks and how it helps lay the foundation for the future encounters with the sisters. I hope the sisters have some more juicy stories about the family. Please keep going and ignore the anonymous troll who hates everything

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