All Comments on 'What Could Go Wrong?'

Loved it. Started off a nice little tail of a group of people playing around, then got a little bit darker but nothing obviously sinister. Then BAM turns nasty on a dime, loved it. Can't wait for the next update! Where will they take them and what can they get them to do?

Eagerly awaiting a sequel, great stuff

Great first story! I'm hoping to see more, either from these girls (especially Hilde!) or from as-yet-unknown sorority sluts!

dear NothingStranger...

the first one or two years of a co ed college in the UK or USA are such easy breezy fun times...which i guess most passouts fondly remember.....:))

but giving a darkest,most sinister twist to those delightful and naughty boy girl bondings?!.

..is it that in reality you were part of a group of guys who faced most humiliating ragging at the hands of seniors?!!!....and could never have that redressed?!!!!....and taking it out on a group of college girls in your writing is the only thing that frees you of those agonising memories of your utter defencelessness in some darkest crevice of the past?!!!! :o

means somewhat frees you....of the feeling of never enjoying real and raw manly power and highs and kicks in reality?!....:o

les miserables!!!;)really!!;)

hoping for a next chapter to see what else could go wrong

Monica needed to be disciplined to learn to become a better woman. Tom is an excellent teacher, I hope there are more chapters to be added to this saga.

Great story, loved the ending when they revealed they took videos and forced them to pose for more photos.

There was no reason for the pool cue.

Perhaps someone will return the favor.