All Comments on 'What Could Have Been Ch. 04'

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prop69prop69about 5 years ago
AWESOME story. What a surprise

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Frankie1952Frankie1952about 5 years ago
More please happyboy1980

This is a nice sexy story that has the promise of being very hot and even sexier when Sha gets more involved. Will be interesting to see where you go with this.

OldUncleAlOldUncleAlalmost 2 years ago

Where did you Go? You write great! we need more guy! This is quality.

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 1 year ago

And there it is! The same mistake made by so many writers who just love to ruin good brother/sister incest stories! You had to bring in someone from another generation to fuck the brother. At least it wasn't a blood relative this time around, only a family friend. The only saving grace was creating her to be divorced. But since you angered me, I'm still voting this down with 1/5.

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I am just trying to write interesting stuff that would help readers relax. I've been uploading here on and off but I'll try to make regularly monthly updates whenever I update my non-adult stories. I'll be branching out into some adult fanfic on this site so fingers-crossed. I...

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