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by Stygian Blaze

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
You really had me going...

And then you just stopped. It was like being in a car, where the driver slams on the brakes, jumps out the door and runs away, leaving you there in the car, alone.

minsueminsueover 19 years ago
Cruel!

Truly cruel to stop there...

Stygian BlazeStygian Blazeover 19 years agoAuthor
*chuckle*

The point of the story is to leave the reader wanting more, to not culminate. To have your brain wonder what happened next.

Cruel? *grin* Maybe... I prefer the word tantalizing. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
very enticing

that was very very hot, enticing, exciting and kept me right on the edge wanting more!!!!

made me want to try everything Zure had seen and wanted done to her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
I wish I was there

Tantalizing..... desire at its best, I wanted to be there with them....

zazrix9zazrix9almost 6 years ago
Awesome

seXi story

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