by Stygian Blaze
And then you just stopped. It was like being in a car, where the driver slams on the brakes, jumps out the door and runs away, leaving you there in the car, alone.
The point of the story is to leave the reader wanting more, to not culminate. To have your brain wonder what happened next.
Cruel? *grin* Maybe... I prefer the word tantalizing. ;)
that was very very hot, enticing, exciting and kept me right on the edge wanting more!!!!
made me want to try everything Zure had seen and wanted done to her.
Tantalizing..... desire at its best, I wanted to be there with them....