by JeanCFNM
I liked that part like Allan wasn't there, all the women deciding what they wanted. These ladies are really warming up to Allans erection, nice that he almost clobbered janet with his Schlong.
Perhaps our girls can show and tell Allan what they have purchased.
You still have much rush, everything happens so quick that there is no time to enjoy it. Stand in details. The story promises.
Your story helped rekindle some wonderful memories of a woman who liked to remain clothed while I, naked, fucked her.
An interesting adventure - thanks for sharing. Were I in Allen's position I'd count myself lucky. I share the feeling of others that the story could be drawn out more, and the lack of punctuation makes it feel rushed, but I prefer to read an unedited story than miss something still not written down.