All Comments on 'What Happened That Night Ch. 03'

Thank you for all for reading my story. Please comment would love to hear your ideas thoughts and critques

H1, congratulations for imagineering such a wildly wicked kaleidoscope of artistic creativity. To paraphrase myself "Once you accept the possibility of the supra-natural and occult, how can you ever believe the stability and correctness of your Real World POV?"

Can't wait for the rest of the story, it should be fascinating! (Classical definition of fascinating)

Thank you for the story so far. Keep up the good work!

Come on man, fill us in.

This is a really interesting story so far. I can't wait to see where you go.with it.

Great dialogue, terrific world building, great action scenes.

The one thing that I hate is Chris's complacency. He doesn't follow up with anything. His world has been turned upside down, while for the better, but still has not extracted any answers about anything from anyone. This is most undoubtedly by design, but still slightly annoying but I can still see why you do it...though still slightly annoying lol

Again the plot is outstanding as are the characters.

Thanks for posting!

Who the fuck eats wheat toast - you know who, communist that's who

baby rabies

Turkey fucking bacon .... bacon is from pig not from a bird. My entire existence is predicated on a division of meats, and this cannot stand in my house.

LMAO

When are all of the time and knowledge gaps going to be filled?

I'm digging the plot and characters but for example at first I though the doctor was his guardian angel, and most of the flashback didn't make sense..

The circle \ tattoo and blackouts..

Please enlighten us also.

I love the story so far, but judging by the dates the previous chapters were published, an ugly inner voice is telling me that the prospects of it actually getting completed aren't looking very good.

Still... worth the risk.

Thank everyone for their comments, all of you are awesome.

I have started the next chapter already and hope to have it up sometime next month. I feel so bad about the delay in this one. I had planned for a lot of questions to be answered this chapter but Azreal wanted to mess with Chris some more, and pissing off Azreal can be hazardous to your helth.

Again thank all of you who stuck with me and there is more to come.

The next chapter?????

Sorry it has been so long. Azreal and Chris had a big argument and not on speaking terms but they have made up....expect the new chapter pretty soon. Thanks all who have stayed with me

and the characters are quite engaging. But are you really going to continue/finish? It seems like 90% of the really good stories never get finished. It would be great to havefound one that does get completed. Thanks for your work.

I love the characters and mythological twist but am frustrated by delay. Hope you can find the time to finish the next chapter

Any update on the story?

I just found this story and am very intrigued. I know that it's been a couple of years since the last chapter, but I was just curious if you plan to write more. I completely understand that sometimes life gets in the way of writing, but I would enjoy learning more about the characters. Thanks for sharing your story. :)

Just us fans, wondering if you're still out there? We all miss them, just wanted to let you know we're still waiting. And trying to be patient. Any word from you would be awesome

What in the whole fuck is going on? Is there gonna be an ending to this, a continuation? This whole story , while very good, is entirely confusing.

If the title of the comment wasn't enough, i really enjoyed your story. While there were quite a few grammarly errors throughout, I felt overall that your writing was solid! I'm definitely looking forward to your next chapter, please don't let your story die.

P.S. Don't worry to much about the grammar to much, and by that i mean if you can find an editor your work will be all the better for it.

I sense a military background, and I also sense your not afraid to us it! If your gonna throw military acronyms at us (like you did in chapter 1), leave some definitions in the foot notes, at least for those who don't speak the lingo.

Oh yeah, more sex scenes! Damn good story so far.

Please continue?

Please finish this. Its a great story

Damn, wish this series continued.

The story was great but the sudden ending was jarring.

Bummer that this story has stopped. I enjoyed it to this point