All Comments on 'What Happens in Vegas... Pt. 01'

This was barely a start of a story . You need to make longer chapters

Intriguing short start to the story, looking forward to see more from this!

None of what he's doing is legal in the confines of a marriage even if a marriage while roofied were legal, yet we're expected to think that he or she would believe that. It doesn't stand even under porn logic.

Get an editor, and don't bother with another chapter until you get it fixed.

Anonys "stupid on so many levels " remark Is exactly that. I like what I have read so far Dont pay any attention tro that asshole, He would bitch if he got hung with a new rope

Hope you continue soon.

Certainly got hooked, I like your start and can't wait for more!

I cant wait to hear what comes next. I like the surreal, confused feeling the wife thing from fpp gives. Lets readers empathize with Everly. Dont listen to the Anon coward, they're just a whiny cunt.

I like the start. Please continue.