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Anonymousover 19 years agoGiving you high marks...
The makings of a great story, although a bit too quick.
Slow down, break into some detail...
Get the wife involved...Build it. Normally it would be "slowly," but in your case SLOWWWWWWLY.
Ya laid some great foundation for a great story, even though it was "a run through the hedges."
Indulge...Think about it..
Anonymousabout 19 years agocant wait for part two
could have ended with the husband telling the wife what happened in the garage
Anonymousover 13 years agoThe series of questions with all those pronouns got me confused... and subsequently uninterested after that.
Thor_Cover 3 years agoMORE
That's it, there needs to be probably 3 more chapters. Perhaps even 5 more.
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