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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
sucks

NightimevisionsNightimevisionsalmost 13 years ago
Could be longer...

....but other than that, I'm liking it so far. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Outside of this part being to short, this is still a great story.

Latinlover15Latinlover15over 11 years ago
Oh shit

....talk about bad timing

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I am working on a few stories, including a draft of a seemingly long-awaited sequel to my summer camp story. Stay tuned, and as always, feedback is appreciated.

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